"Night of treason " - Adrian Witczak
initiation
dreamed in the night had become a tool of betrayal
tuned to love
he left for two days
vigilantly watched the images
shadow foreign
mantle she did not want psychodrama
dragged the body to damp the flame
treason were made
I did not commit to a warm
Interior
talked all night
fell asleep in the morning I wrote her essay in philosophy, it placed
already know how to write war stories grandma
go outside
go into the world when I can not sleep
miss the inner side of
OPINION :
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eviction - a good poem - a situation of "love", but with such a context, that eroticism becomes a Supporting Role, and at the forefront is an "inner ego" and these emotions, states, finding by author can make an intriguing story.
Both lines with excellent workshop, indicating remarkable talent, and if new ways of thinking about the world of poetry. Bode well - this author is already a "pro", and it is original.
eviction - a good poem - a situation of "love", but with such a context, that eroticism becomes a Supporting Role, and at the forefront is an "inner ego" and these emotions, states, finding by author can make an intriguing story. Both lines with excellent workshop, indicating remarkable talent, and if new ways of thinking about the world of poetry. Bode well - this author is already a "pro", and it is original.
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